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There is a problem in the road outside your house

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to bring to your attention the roads maintenance issue in my local area. My name is Leela, and I live in House Unit 10 from Beautiful Township. I have been lived here for 15 years and have never made a complaint. About a week ago, the roads in this township were full of small holes due to the heavy rain. I have much appreciated the quick response from the local council that the repair work is in progress. However, the workers tend to finish their work at 7 pm every night. Thus, traffic became so jam in our local area, resulting in some people not returning home early. I would like to suggest finishing work by 5 pm. However, you may continue the repairing work on Saturday from 8 am to 3 pm to quickly fix the problems for road users' safety. I look forward to the problem being resolved. Yours faithfully, John Hustle
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to bring to your attention the
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roads
maintenance issue in my local area. My name is
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Leela
, and I
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live
in
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House
Unit 10 from
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Beautiful
Township. I have been
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lived
here for 15 years and have never made a complaint. About a week ago, the roads in this township were full of
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small
holes due to the heavy rain. I have much appreciated the quick response from the local council that the repair
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work
is in progress.
However
, the workers tend to finish their
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work
at 7 pm every night.
Thus
, traffic became
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so
jam in our local area, resulting in
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some
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people
not returning home early. I would like to suggest finishing
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work
by 5 pm.
However
, you may continue the repairing
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work
on Saturday from 8 am to 3 pm to
quickly
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fix
the problems for road users' safety. I look forward to the problem
being resolved
.

Yours
faithfully
, John Hustle

IELTS letter There is a problem in the road outside your house

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  American English
2 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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