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You recently took a long vacation. In your absence, a friend did you a huge favor. Write a letter thanking your friend. In your letter: Explain what the favor was Describe how this favor helped you Offer compensation Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

You recently took a long vacation. In your absence, a friend did you a huge favor. Write a letter thanking your friend. In your letter: Explain what the favor was Describe how this favor helped you Offer compensation You do NOT need to write any addresses. jWJL
Dear John, I hope you are doing great. Last night I reached my apartment after the long holidays and I can't control my excitement to write to you. Since I planned my vacation immediately, I could not plan everything properly. I'm extremely pleased that you are staying next to my door due to the fact you always supported me at the difficult situations. I forgot to mention watering my plant as well as giving food to parrot that I realized that after reaching the flat. But you could manage both pretty well and I could see that while reaching here because there were lots of flowers bloom in the plants and somany veggies were also there. I never maintained my garden this well and my eyes were running out of tears due to the happiness after seeing them. I'm overjoyed about the support and recompense your effort, I will take you to your favorite Chinese restaurant at Pune to have your special dish. Waiting eagerly for you! Lovingly, Tom.
Dear John, I hope you are doing great. Last night I reached my apartment after the long holidays and I can't control my excitement to write to you. Since I planned my vacation immediately, I could not plan everything
properly
. I'm
extremely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
that you are staying
next
to my door due to the fact you always supported me at the difficult situations. I forgot to mention watering my plant
as well
as giving food to parrot that I realized that after reaching the flat.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
you could manage both pretty well and I could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
that while reaching here
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
there were lots of flowers bloom in the plants and
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somany
veggies were
also
there. I never maintained my garden this well and my eyes were running out of tears due to the happiness after seeing them. I'm overjoyed about the support and recompense your effort, I will take you to your favorite Chinese restaurant at Pune to have your special dish. Waiting
eagerly
for you!
Lovingly
, Tom.
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IELTS letter You recently took a long vacation. In your absence, a friend did you a huge favor. Write a letter thanking your friend. In your letter: Explain what the favor was Describe how this favor helped you Offer compensation You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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  American English
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169 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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