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Write a complaint letter to your neighbor's as they making a lots of notice by playing music.

Write a complaint letter to your neighbor's as they making a lots of notice by playing music. 6Brl

Dear William, Hope you and your family doing well! I am writing this letter to complaint about the noise that you are continuously doing from few days. Although, I am living just downstairs to your apartment and I work from home for office chores. My working hours are 10am to 5pm in which I could not take a little break. Yesterday, I had a conference meeting with my clients consequently, I was not able to heard them properly due to loud music at your home. I thought you might organized a party during day. Unfortunately, it's continued today morning hence I couldn't sleep whole night. There are another neighbours are also disturbed by loud voice. Some of them having a family or children. Therefore, we request you to either play music at slow volume or do sound proofing. I hope you understand our issues or corporate with us. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks

Dear William, Hope you and your family doing well! I am writing this letter to complaint about the noise that you are continuously
 doing from few days. Although, I am living This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 downstairs to your apartment and I work from home for office chores. My working hours are 10am to 5pm in which I could not take a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 break. Yesterday, I had a conference meeting with my clients consequently
, I was not able to heard them properly
 due to loud music at your home. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 you might The verb 'might' requires the base form of the verb: "organize"organize
organized
 a party during day. Unfortunately, it's continued This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, "this morning" is used.this morning
today morning
hence
 I couldn't sleep whole night. There are another Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbours' is British English.neighbors
neighbours
 are also
 disturbed by loud voice. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 of them having a family or children. Therefore
, we request you to either play music at slow volume or do sound proofing. I hope you understand our issues or corporate with us. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks

IELTS letter Write a complaint letter to your neighbor's as they making a lots of notice by playing music.

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

156 words

5.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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