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A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice

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Dear Anmol, I was thrilled to hear that finally you have decided to learn driving and I am more than happy to provide you guidance or any tips. Having an own driving Licence is undoubtedly useful. You will no longer rely on others for transportation if you have your own licence to drive a vehicle yourself. I would recommend you to join a good driving school in order to master the basics of driving. I know few good driving schools in the neighbourhood, but I recommend Ace Driving School. Because they have dedicated and well-qualified instructors as their staff. Usually driving classes comes in packages with fixed driving hours. I suggest you make optimum use of the hours in order to get benefits. Before joining the driving school you can also follow and read the official website of Road and Transport to familiar with the traffic rules and regulations. Finally, If you don't clear the driving test the first time, don't give up. Few people do so don't worry. I am sure with more practice, comes more confidence, which helps in clearing the test. I hope my advice has been of use to you. Best Regards, Saloni Malhotra
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in clearing the
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. I hope my advice has been of
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to you.

Best Regards,

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IELTS letter A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice

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