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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.

You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . , WNeb
Dear Manager, Hoping you to be in the good of health and spirit. It's Ana Smith here. I am writing this letter to tell you about my experience while my stay at your hotel. I stayed in your hotel for a night while visiting North Carolina for some business meeting earlier this October. It has a great interior and the food and service was great too, but to my disappointment the cooling system of your hotel was not working efficiently as the weather was quite unusual and hot then at North Carolina. Due to this hot weather and non functioning of air conditioning system I spent whole night in great trouble as there was very suffocation in my room and no proper ventilation system was there. I had to open the window which is right in front of the forest to get some fresh air which resulted in enterance of alot of insects into my room. Moreover, the noise of wild animals did not let me sleep well. In short I spent all night in great trouble. I would request you to please look into this matter seriously and do some favourable action accordingly. I would further suggest you to get some portable air conditioners or water coolers for future use. You should also consider to improve the ventialtion system. Thanking in anticipation and looking forward to be favoured. Yours Truly, Ana Smith
Dear Manager,

Hoping you to be in the
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good
of health and spirit. It's Ana Smith here. I am writing this letter to
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tell
you about my experience while my stay at your hotel. I stayed in your hotel for a night while visiting North Carolina for
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some
business meeting earlier this October. It has a
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great
interior and the food and service was
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great
too,
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but
to my disappointment the cooling system of your hotel was not working
efficiently
as the weather was quite unusual and hot then at North Carolina. Due to this hot weather and
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non functioning
of air conditioning system I spent whole night in
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great
trouble as there was
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very
suffocation in my room and no proper ventilation system was there. I had to open the window which is right in front of the forest to
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get
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some
fresh air which resulted in
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enterance
of
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alot
of insects into my room.
Moreover
, the noise of wild animals did not
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let
me sleep well. In
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short I
spent all night in
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great
trouble.

I would request you to
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please
look into this matter
seriously
and do
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some
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favourable
action
accordingly
. I would
further
suggest you to
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get
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some
portable air conditioners or water coolers for future
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use
. You should
also
consider to
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improve
the
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ventialtion
system.

Thanking in anticipation and looking forward
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to be
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favoured
.

Yours
Truly
,

Ana Smith
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IELTS letter You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . ,

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6 paragraphs
232 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.