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You hired a car from a company, while. While you were driving you had a small accident. Write a letter to the company to explain it. In your letter: when and where you hired it describe how the accident happened what kind of action did you take after the accident

You hired a car from a company, while. While you were driving you had a small accident. Write a letter to the company to explain it. In your letter: when and where you hired it describe how the accident happened what kind of action did you take after the accident YJ1n
Dear sir, I have recently rented a car from your Madhapur showroom in Hyderabad. Unfortunately, I encountered with a minor accident while I am going to the airport. I am hoping you would go through the report attached to the letter and proceed with the necessary action. I have hired this Skoda Rapid from your Madhapur showroom on 21st august 2019 for a duration of two weeks and paid a week's rent upfront. I must admit you have professional employees and the automobile was top-notch in service and also the maintenance. I have always relied on your company whenever I needed a hire car. I was driving to the airport to receive my husband who is coming from the US for a vacation. The accident was caused by the other vehicle failing to stop at the red right at the intersection I was passing through. The car hit the back bumper. The driver of the car agreed to pay the compensation of Rs 1500/- for the damage caused. I have attached the report and the paper work regarding this accident to the letter. Meanwhile, i would request you to arrange a replacement for my current vehicle. Please feel free to call me if any you require any information regarding the paperwork.
Dear sir,

I have recently rented a car from your
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Madhapur
showroom in Hyderabad. Unfortunately, I encountered with a minor accident while I am going to the airport. I am hoping you would go through the report attached to the letter and proceed with the necessary action.

I have hired this
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Skoda
Rapid from your
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Madhapur
showroom on 21st
The month "August" needs to be capitalized.
august
2019 for a duration of two weeks and paid a week's rent upfront.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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must
admit you have professional employees and the automobile was top-notch in service and
also
the maintenance.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have always relied on your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
whenever I needed a hire car.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
was driving to the airport to receive my husband who is coming from the US for a vacation. The accident
was caused
by the other vehicle failing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
at the red right at the intersection I was passing through. The car hit the back bumper.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
driver of the car
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agreed
to pay the compensation of Rs 1500/- for the damage caused. I have attached the report and the paper work regarding this accident to the letter. Meanwhile,
Did you mean "I"?
i
would request you to arrange a replacement for my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
vehicle.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
feel free to call me if any you require any information regarding the paperwork.
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IELTS letter You hired a car from a company, while. While you were driving you had a small accident. Write a letter to the company to explain it. In your letter: when and where you hired it describe how the accident happened what kind of action did you take after the accident

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6 paragraphs
211 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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