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You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: -say which advertisement you are answering -describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about -explain why you would be a suitable teacher

You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: -say which advertisement you are answering -describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about -explain why you would be a suitable teacher kkNN
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in the position of Mathematics Professor at your evening college. With respect to your advertisement dated 31st January 2021 in The Hindu - Classifieds section regarding the recruitment of an experienced mathematics professor to conduct classes at night, I think I will be a suitable person for this position. My area of expertise is the core topics of mathematics such as probability and statistics and would like to teach them to the students. The former is about identifying feasible events well in advance using combinations and permutation of the possibilities, whereas the latter is about measuring an event in terms of percentage. I am confident that I deserve to be recruited for this position because I have more than a decade of experience in the field of mathematics, especially in probability and statistics. Moreover, I am a visiting faculty at IIT Madras for the evening batch students during weekends, which I think will be a great asset to your college. I hope you will consider me for this position. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Sriram S
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in the position of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Mathematics
Professor at your evening college.

With respect to your advertisement dated 31st January 2021 in The Hindu
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-
Classifieds section regarding the recruitment of an experienced
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mathematics
professor to conduct classes at night, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
I will be a suitable person for this position.

My area of expertise is the core topics of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mathematics
such as probability and statistics and would like to teach them to the students. The former is about identifying feasible
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
well in advance using combinations and permutation of the possibilities, whereas the latter is about measuring an
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
in terms of percentage.

I am confident that I deserve to
be recruited
for this position
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because
I have more than a decade of experience in the field of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mathematics
,
especially
in probability and statistics.
Moreover
, I am a visiting faculty at IIT Madras for the evening batch students during weekends, which I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
will be a great asset to your college.

I hope you will consider me for this position.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Sriram S
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: -say which advertisement you are answering -describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about -explain why you would be a suitable teacher

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189 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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