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You have recently learned about an opening for an internship at a local company that you are interested in. Write a letter to the director of the company. In your letter, introduce yourself explain how you learned about the internship explain why you would be suitable for the internship

You have recently learned about an opening for an internship at a local company that you are interested in. Write a letter to the director of the company. In your letter, introduce yourself explain how you learned about the internship explain why you would be suitable for the internship 10BA
I am writing to inquire about the opening for an internship with Detson Inc. My name is Jincy Abraham and currently I am in my last year of Post graduation course in business administration from Hardvard University in London. For that reason, I want to get some practical experience in a business environment. I come across about the opening through one of my friend who is the employee in the same company. Moreover, its my dream to be part of a leading enterprise to learn all the aspect of work. I believe that I am the suitable candidate for the post and would render my full effort to give my best in the area of my work. I hope so you consider profile for the position and give me a chance to be part of your team. Looking Forward to the positive response. Yours faithfully, John Samuel
I am writing to inquire about the opening for an internship with
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Detson
Inc. My name is
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Jincy
Abraham and
currently
I am in my last year of Post graduation course in business administration from
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Hardvard
University in London. For that reason, I want to
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get
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some
practical experience in a business environment.

I
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come
across about the opening through one of my friend who is the employee in the same
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company
.
Moreover
,
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its
my dream to be part of a leading enterprise to learn all the aspect of work.

I believe that I am the suitable candidate for the post and would render my full effort to give my best in the area of my work. I hope
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
you consider profile for the position and give me a chance to be part of your team. Looking Forward to the
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positive
response. Yours
faithfully
, John
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Samuel

IELTS letter You have recently learned about an opening for an internship at a local company that you are interested in. Write a letter to the director of the company. In your letter, introduce yourself explain how you learned about the internship explain why you would be suitable for the internship

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  American English
3 paragraphs
146 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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