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You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take NQj2
Dear Manager, I would like to bring to your notice the unpleasent experience while my one week stay in your hotel. The day I entered the city, I could feel sudden variations in the weather. Because of such unusual behaviour outside, the temperature inside the room was not adequate which cretaed some uneasiness. The temperature inside the room was not adapting the outside temperature. There were instances where the room temperature was hot eventhough the outside temperature was not cold and vice-versa. I had to struggle to keep my body temperature levels normal. The struggle started wherein, I had to call the Service Desk team to check and modify the temperature as the entire hotel is centrally controlled. In every 1 hour, I had to ring the person to help and adjust the temperature. This process was very frustating and tiring. After so much backwards and forwards, I requested to move into a non-air condition room wherein, I can open the windows and accordingly adjust as per the temperature. After going through the experience, I will like to make a suggestion wherein please eliminate the hotel from centralised cooling system to independent cooling systems which can be controlled by the guests and will make the guest more comfortable in the room. I hope you will take this feedback in a more positive way. Your Sincerely, XYZ
Dear Manager,

I would like to bring to your notice the
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unpleasent
experience while my
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one week
stay in your hotel. The day I entered the city, I could feel sudden variations in the weather.
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Because
of such unusual
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behaviour
outside, the
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temperature
inside the
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room
was not adequate which
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cretaed
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some
uneasiness.

The
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temperature
inside the
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room
was not adapting the outside
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temperature
. There were instances where the
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room
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temperature
was hot
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eventhough
the outside
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temperature
was not
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cold
and vice-versa. I had to struggle to
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keep
my body
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temperature
levels normal.

The struggle
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started
wherein, I had to call the Service Desk team to
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check
and modify the
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temperature
as the entire hotel is
centrally
controlled. In every 1 hour, I had to ring the person to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
and adjust the
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temperature
. This process was
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very
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frustating
and tiring. After
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so
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much
backwards and forwards, I requested to
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move
into a non-air condition
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room
wherein, I can open the windows and
accordingly
adjust as per the temperature.

After going through the experience, I
Did you mean "would"?
will
like to
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make
a suggestion wherein
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please
eliminate the hotel from
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centralised
cooling system to independent cooling systems which can
be controlled
by the guests and will
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make
the guest more comfortable in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
. I hope you will take this feedback in a more
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positive
way.

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Your
Sincerely
,

XYZ
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IELTS letter You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

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