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Write a letter to a tour company manager to give your appreciation for your tour guide. Include in your letter -Your tour details - what you liked about the guide -ways for the manager to reward the guide

Write a letter to a tour company manager to give your appreciation for your tour guide. Include in your letter -Your tour details - what you liked about the guide -ways for the manager to reward the guide 3qmb
Dear Mr. Ferdinand I have recently been in one of your incredible tours to Paris, I am writing to express my satisfaction with the tour guide who was with us all the way. Last month, I had informed on the internet about the 3 days tour to Paris. I have had decided to go to Paris since I was teenager, and my friends always advice me I will need a tour guide there. Besides the reasonable price of your tour, I was totally delighted because the tour guide included in every places that we could go. I have traveled with my friends there, all of them are International students here in Italy, It was wonderful for us when we recognized that your tour guide, Jimmy, can speak Arabic, Persian, English and French, so he explained to us the history of the places briefly in our native languages. Enclosed in this letter, I include some cash prize for him, It would be grateful if you give him the money and book another trip for my friends for the next week with him. Yours faithfully Alireza Dadashpour
Dear Mr. Ferdinand

I have recently been in one of your incredible
tours
to Paris, I am writing to express my satisfaction with the
tour
guide
who was with us all the way.

Last month, I had informed on the internet about the 3 days
tour
to Paris. I have had decided to go to Paris since I was
teenager
, and my friends always advice me I will need a
tour
guide
there.
Besides
the reasonable price of your
tour
, I was
totally
delighted
because
the
tour
guide
included in every
places
that we could go.

I have traveled with my friends there, all of them are International students here in Italy, It was wonderful for us when we recognized that your
tour
guide
, Jimmy, can speak Arabic, Persian, English and French,
so
he
explained
to us the history of the places
briefly
in our native languages.

Enclosed in this letter, I include
some
cash prize for him, It would be grateful if you give him the money and book another trip for my friends for the
next
week with him.

Yours
faithfully


Alireza
Dadashpour
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a tour company manager to give your appreciation for your tour guide. Include in your letter -Your tour details - what you liked about the guide -ways for the manager to reward the guide

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
184 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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