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you borrowed and important textbook from a friend last term. You now realize your friend has returned home overseas and you still have the book. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter - apologise for the mistake - Find out how important the book is to him/her- say waht you will do

you borrowed and important textbook from a friend last term. You now realize your friend has returned home overseas and you still have the book. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter - apologise for the mistake - Find out how important the book is to him/her- say waht you will do dPmp
Dear Sam, It’s been a long time since I wrote to you. I’ve been run off my work all the time. How are you? Hope everyone at your home is good. As I’m unable to retun your Maths book I borrowed last term, I’m writing to apologise for the same. Do you remember the Maths book of Author Ghawane you gave me at the begining of our third semester? As I was busy completing my term project, I couldn’t realised to return your book before you left the University. I’m extremely sorry for this. I understand that this book was one of your favourites and you wanted to take it to your hometown. I’m terrified and feeling shameful as I could not return the book on-time. Perhaps, I should have contacted you before your travel & returned it to you in advance. I hope you won’t be angry on me. As I know your postal address, I’m going to post you this book on Monday. Let me know once you receive. Once again, sorry for this mistake and I hope you don’t mind this too much. Best Wishes, Jay
Dear Sam,

It’s been a long time since I wrote to you. I’ve
been run
off my work all the time. How are you? Hope everyone at your home is
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good
. As I’m unable to
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retun
your
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Maths
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book
I borrowed last term, I’m writing to
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apologise
for the same.

Do you remember the
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Maths
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book
of Author
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Ghawane
you gave me at the
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begining
of our third semester? As I was busy completing my term project, I couldn’t
The verb 'couldn't' requires base form of this verb: "realise"
realised
to return your
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book
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before
you
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left
the University. I’m
extremely
sorry for this.

I understand that this
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book
was one of your
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favourites
and you wanted to take it to your hometown.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’m terrified and feeling shameful as I could not return the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
on-time. Perhaps, I should have contacted you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
your travel & returned it to you in advance.

I hope you won’t be angry on me. As I know your postal address, I’m going to post you this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
on Monday.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me know once you receive.

Once again, sorry for this mistake and I hope you don’t mind this too much.

Best Wishes,

Jay
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IELTS letter you borrowed and important textbook from a friend last term. You now realize your friend has returned home overseas and you still have the book. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter - apologise for the mistake - Find out how important the book is to him/her- say waht you will do

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188 words
6.0
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