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You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract. Pq3d
Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Alay Desai and I am renting the flat at Parkwood Ave for the past six months. As I am sure that I have been a good tenant during my period. I pay my rent on time and take a really good care of the flat. I am writing this letter to inform you that my manager asked me to make to a different location starting November. I am aware of the fact that our rental agreement ends in January but, unfortunately, I have to end the agreement early due to the above-mentioned reason. I hope you can understand my situation as it is beyond my control. Therefore, I request you to end our agreement in November and sattle our accounts by then. Further, I can understand that it is not allowed to end the agreement earlier but I hope you can relate to my situation and still return my deposit. Yours Faithfully, Alay
Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is
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Alay
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Desai and
I am renting the flat at
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Parkwood
Ave for the past six months.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
I am sure that I have been a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
tenant during my period. I pay my rent on time and take a
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
care of the flat.

I am writing this letter to inform you that my manager asked me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
to a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
location starting November.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am aware of the fact that our rental
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agreement
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ends
in January
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but
, unfortunately, I
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have to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
end
the
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agreement
early due to the above-mentioned reason.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope you can understand my situation as it is beyond my control.
Therefore
, I request you to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
end
our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
agreement
in November and
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sattle
our accounts by then.

Further
, I can understand that it is not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
allowed
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
end
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
agreement
earlier
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I hope you can relate to my situation and
still
return my deposit.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Alay

IELTS letter You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
157 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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