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You recently stayed in a hotel and left an item in the room. Letter to manager, Decribe the item that you left , explain where you think the item might be, sggest how the manager can return the item to you.

You recently stayed in a hotel and left an item in the room. Letter to manager, Decribe the item that you left, explain where you think the item might be, sggest how the manager can return the item to you. GMLOj
Dear Sir/Ma'am, I am writing this letter to seek your help to find out the item I have left at your hotel. My stay in room number 203 was from 21st March to 23rd march, which was incredible. Unfortunately, I forget a document file with a number of additional certificates that are extremely critical. The colour of the portfolio is brown and the outer cover is marked with my name. Last time, I saw those papers on the top shelf of the wardrobe and thought that it would be safe there. Although the exact location did not strike my mind. I hope this information would be adequate for you to track the item. Kindly return the file on speed post by using my address on my identity card. For further details feel free to call me. Kind regards,
Dear Sir/Ma'am,

I am writing this letter to seek your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to find out the item I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
at your hotel. My stay in room number 203 was from 21st March to 23rd march, which was incredible.

Unfortunately, I forget a document file with a number of additional certificates that are
extremely
critical. The
Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.
colour
of the portfolio is brown and the outer cover
is marked
with my name.

Last time, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
those papers on the top shelf of the wardrobe and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
that it would be safe there.
“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
the exact location did not strike my mind. I hope this information would be adequate for you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
track
the item.

Kindly return the file on speed post by using my address on my identity card. For
further
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
feel free to call me.

Kind regards,

IELTS letter You recently stayed in a hotel and left an item in the room. Letter to manager, Decribe the item that you left, explain where you think the item might be, sggest how the manager can return the item to you.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
138 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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