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You rent a new flat. A bad weather caused a damage to it. Write a letter to your landlord explaining him 1. What is the damage caused 2. What are the problems you are facing because of it 3.what do you want him to do about it.

You rent a new flat. A bad weather caused a damage to it. Write a letter to your landlord explaining him 1. What is the damage caused 2. What are the problems you are facing because of it 3. what do you want him to do about it. 3a1Kl
Dear Mr. Brown, My name is Sarvajyoth. I am one of the new tenants residing in your basement. I am writing to complain you about the nuisance faced by me as a consequence of heavy rainfall and strong wind in the recent times. As a result of detrimental weather conditions, the window of my bedroom has broken. In addition, water was filled inside my room which ruined the paintings on the wall. Although, I was managing the situation my covering the window with a curtain, but it also got drenched with rain water the other day. Furthermore, my room gets cool by the wind which caused me fever. It will be great if you fix the new window with blinds in order to eliminate the menace tackled by me or, otherwise, i will be left with no choice of complaining the relevant authorities. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours truly, Sarvajyoth
Dear Mr. Brown,

My name is
Sarvajyoth
. I am one of the new tenants residing in your basement. I am writing to complain you about the nuisance faced by me as a consequence of heavy rainfall and strong wind in the recent times.

As a result
of detrimental weather conditions, the window of my bedroom has broken.
In addition
, water
was filled
inside my room which ruined the paintings on the wall.

Although, I was managing the situation my covering the window with a curtain,
but
it
also
got
drenched with rain water the other day.
Furthermore
, my room
gets
cool by the wind which caused me fever.

It will be great if you
fix
the new window with blinds in order to eliminate the menace tackled by me or,
otherwise
,
i
will be
left
with no choice of complaining the relevant authorities. I hope to hear from you
soon
.

Yours
truly
,
Sarvajyoth
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IELTS letter You rent a new flat. A bad weather caused a damage to it. Write a letter to your landlord explaining him 1. What is the damage caused 2. What are the problems you are facing because of it 3. what do you want him to do about it.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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