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You have recently moved to different house write a letter to an English speaking friend in your letter explain why you have moved discribe the new friend invite your friend to come and visit

You have recently moved to different house write a letter to an English speaking friend in your letter explain why you have moved discribe the new friend invite your friend to come and visit L6PV
Dear Jane, How are you? I hope this letter feels happy. Significantly we moved to another place. As My moments get transfer and get posted in chinna. And also currently nothing left except my beliv. Since we vecate our house you are not in home but also intemeted to our near house if James came give this greetings. Hope it will get to you. This place is too ancient. I felt dis intrest to moove here. Even though language is differ here. While we landed. We get the new English friend name Kate. He is anomalous. Here all people's are very friendly. I learned her people's are eternity rest less. Here karate if a famous sports. So that i learn that game. I was vicissitude here although very excited here. Why don't you come and stay here? Ore else you miss all those Moments. The art full musiam iand the grate wall of China is one of the amusium. And. Those are the historical place and also my karathe chanpionship competition is in coming Friday I invite you all your family members I am waiting for your promptThank you Thiru
Dear Jane, How are you? I hope this letter feels happy.
Significantly
we
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moved
to another place. As My moments
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get
transfer and
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get
posted in
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chinna
. And
also
currently
nothing
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left
except my
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beliv
. Since we
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vecate
our
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house
you are not in home
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
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intemeted
to our near
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house
if James came give
Did you mean "these"?
this
greetings. Hope it will
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get
to you. This place is too ancient. I felt dis
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intrest
to
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moove
here.
“Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Even though
language is
Consider using a past participle here: "differed".
differ
here. While we landed. We
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the new English friend name Kate. He is anomalous. Here all
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
friendly. I learned her
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's are eternity rest less. Here karate if a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "sport"?
sports
.
“So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
So that
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
learn that game. I was vicissitude here although
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
excited here. Why don't you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
and stay here? Ore else you miss all those Moments. The art full
Possible spelling mistake found.
musiam
Possible spelling mistake found.
iand
the grate wall of China is one of the
Possible spelling mistake found.
amusium
. And. Those are the historical place and
also
my
Possible spelling mistake found.
karathe
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chanpionship
competition is in coming Friday I invite you all your family members I am waiting for your
Possible spelling mistake found.
promptThank
you
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Thiru

IELTS letter You have recently moved to different house write a letter to an English speaking friend in your letter explain why you have moved discribe the new friend invite your friend to come and visit

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
189 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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