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You recently spent a weekend with your friend in his/her new house . write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should :

You recently spent a weekend with your friend in his/her new house. write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: pblBd

Dear Akshay, I reached my home yesterday and i am still admiring about your new house. The last weekend has been amazing at your new place. I shared it with my family & showed them the pictures we clicked together of your house. They are in awe of your house. The backdoor balcony sea view is most mesmerising thing of your house. It has the perfect relaxing aura to calm anyone's should and mind. Your idea of meditation room just adjacent to the garden is spot on. The greenry blends the right energy in whole room. I am taking this idea with from your house as i would implement the same whenever we have renovation of our side. The summer break next month gives us 10 days, perhaps you can come over my place and we will spend the time to work on our assignments and later we can depart to 'Giri Hills' for a 2 days trek. write me back about plans for next month. Warm wishes, Sandeep Sharma

Dear Akshay,

I reached my home yesterday and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am still
 admiring about your new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
. The last weekend has been amazing at your new place.

I shared it with my family & This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 them the pictures we clicked together of your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
. They are in awe of your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
.

The backdoor balcony sea view is most Possible spelling mistake. 'mesmerising' is British English.mesmerizing
mesmerising
 thing of your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
. It has the perfect relaxing aura to calm anyone's should and mind.

Your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 of meditation room This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 adjacent to the garden is spot on. The Possible spelling mistake found.greenerygreenly
greenry
 blends the right energy in whole room.

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idea
 with from your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 as Did you mean "I"?I
i
 would implement the same whenever we have renovation of our side.

The summer break next
 month gives us 10 days, perhaps you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
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place and
 we will spend the time

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Giri
 Hills' for a 2 days trek.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWrite
write
 me back about plans for next
 month.

Warm wishes,

Sandeep Sharma