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Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college in the letter, describe the situation, explain your problems and why it's difficult to work and say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.

Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college in the letter, describe the situation, explain your problems and why it's difficult to work and say what kind of accommodation you would prefer. 8JpN5
Dear sir or madamRef: change of the accommodation. To above information have been having problems with my roommate whenever I come home I always found the place department dirty while minewhile I live the department clean am tired of always me to be cleaning the place. Another difficult thing is when I start preparing for tomorrow's works from nowhere she puts loud music to disturb me to per attention to what am doing. Therefore I would love to put in an accomodation which is quite and clean I don't mind to stay with another person as long as is focused and determined young lady. Thank you Your consideration will be high appreciated. Jane musau.
Dear sir or
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madamRef
:
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change
of the accommodation. To above information have been having problems with my roommate whenever I
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come
home I always found the place department dirty while
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minewhile
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
the department clean
am tired
of always me to be cleaning the place. Another difficult thing is when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
preparing for tomorrow's works from nowhere she puts loud music to disturb me to per attention to what
Did you mean "am I"?
am
doing.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Therefore
I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to put in an
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accomodation
which is quite and clean I don't
The verb 'mind' is used with the gerund form: "mind staying".
mind to stay
with another person as long as
is focused
and determined young lady. Thank you Your consideration will be high appreciated. Jane
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musau
.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college in the letter, describe the situation, explain your problems and why it's difficult to work and say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
114 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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