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a formal letter to change course

a formal letter to change course 5277D
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to request that helping me to change my recent course. My name is Mahsa Shirmard, and my student number is 45678. I am studying computer science. It has been started two months ago from today. While I thought it would be exciting and helpful, I failed to achieve my goals. I should be ready for the presentation and write down my main course assignment. I was extremely disappointed with the computer equipment. I think the computer courses do not have a well-prepared timetable. Unfortunately, the out-of-date personal computers are unsuitable. There are not enough, especially for current classes in the evenings. I would appreciate it if you could replace my current computer course with an education in academic writing that will start next week. I hope that my request does not cause you any inconvenience. Thank you for your help and support. Yours sincerely,
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to request that helping me to
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change
my recent course.

My name is
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Mahsa
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Shirmard
, and my student number is 45678. I am studying computer science. It has been
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started
two months ago from
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today
. While I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
it would be exciting and helpful, I failed to achieve my goals. I should be ready for the presentation and write down my main course assignment.

I was
extremely
disappointed with the computer equipment.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
the computer courses do not have a well-prepared timetable. Unfortunately, the out-of-date personal computers are unsuitable. There are not
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enough
,
especially
for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
classes in the evenings.

I would appreciate it if you could replace my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
computer course with an education in academic writing that will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
next
week.

I hope that my request does not cause you any inconvenience. Thank you for your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
and support.

Yours
sincerely
,

IELTS letter a formal letter to change course

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  American English
7 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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