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a formal letter to change course

a formal letter to change course 5277D

Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to request that helping me to change my recent course. My name is Mahsa Shirmard, and my student number is 45678. I am studying computer science. It has been started two months ago from today. While I thought it would be exciting and helpful, I failed to achieve my goals. I should be ready for the presentation and write down my main course assignment. I was extremely disappointed with the computer equipment. I think the computer courses do not have a well-prepared timetable. Unfortunately, the out-of-date personal computers are unsuitable. There are not enough, especially for current classes in the evenings. I would appreciate it if you could replace my current computer course with an education in academic writing that will start next week. I hope that my request does not cause you any inconvenience. Thank you for your help and support. Yours sincerely,

Dear Mr. Smith,

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change
 my recent course.

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Mahsa
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Shirmard
, and my student number is 45678. I am studying computer science. It has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
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today
. While I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 it would be exciting and helpful, I failed to achieve my goals. I should be ready for the presentation and write down my main course assignment.

I was extremely
 disappointed with the computer equipment. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 the computer courses do not have a well-prepared timetable. Unfortunately, the out-of-date personal computers are unsuitable. There are not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
, especially
 for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 classes in the evenings.

I would appreciate it if you could replace my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 computer course with an education in academic writing that will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
next
 week.

I hope that my request does not cause you any inconvenience. Thank you for your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 and support.

Yours sincerely
, 