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Hello Mr. Boulhala. I hope you’re good and healthy. You know I worked as an intern another company and there is a HR manger who hired me. Then she was transitoned another project where is Ankara. Then we are still friend and She was like my mentor. I did something and I asked to help me and she accepted. She knows company policy, diciplinary proccess and procedures. She said If nothing happen She is gonna come to İstanbul next Saturday and teach me what she knows. So what do you think? Does it bother you? If it it okay for you I think that we can focus on another subjects until she comes, Then I started to creat the proccess. I can prepare agreement with legal department meantime. What do you think?

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