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You recently spent a vacation at the home of some friends who live in a different city.

You recently spent a vacation at the home of some friends who live in a different city. ArrEl

Dear Rita, I hope you pink of your health. I was amazed that I spend a holidays at your home which is in Mumbai. I had great time to fun and enjoyed a lot of day which is I never forget in my life and I really thankful to you that your house is so beautiful as you are. I had huge memory to keep in my mind. The most wonderful trip is that me and your family go together is zoo beach which unbelieveable for me. I tried to some new experience with your family member as a foody person. I had great teste with your father and he is kind hearted person who I met first time in my life. In the next vacation I invites you at my home to spent some time with me and my family here is also some wonderful places which is we will visit there at your present and my mother also waiting for you to spend next holiday with us. I look forward from your favorable reply. With love, Namrata Sonani.

Dear Rita,

I hope you pink of your health. I was amazed
 that I spend Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a holiday" or simply "holidays"?a holidayholidays
a holidays
 at your home which is in Mumbai. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 had great time to fun and enjoyed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 day which is I never forget in my life and Did you mean "I am"?I am
I
really
 thankful to you that your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 as you are. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 had huge memory to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 in my mind.

The most wonderful trip is that me and your family go together is zoo beach which Possible spelling mistake found.unbelievable
unbelieveable
 for me. I tried to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 new experience with your family member as a Possible spelling mistake found.FoodfoodfoodsMoodywoodymoody
foody
 person. I had great Possible spelling mistake found.testteststastetestedtestertesty
teste
 with your Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).father, and
father and
 he is This word is normally spelled with hyphen.kind-hearted
kind hearted
 person who I met first
 time in my life.

In the next
 vacation I The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "invite"invite
invites
 you at my home Did you mean "to spend"?to spend
to spent
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time with me and my family here is also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 wonderful places which is we will visit there at your present and my mother also
 waiting for you to spend next
 holiday with us.

I look forward from your favorable reply.

With This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
, Possible spelling mistake found.NarmadaNarrateNamathInamorataAmrita
Namrata
Possible spelling mistake found.Sonali
Sonani
. 