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In the next talk, we are going to have a presentation with a famous writer. We still wonder the issue. We would like to get suggestions from members in the club. Who would you suggest talking in the show. What topic shoud the writer talk? write an email to the club’s manager and give your reasons to support for your choice.

In the next talk, we are going to have a presentation with a famous writer. We still wonder the issue. We would like to get suggestions from members in the club. Who would you suggest talking in the show. What topic shoud the writer talk? write an email to the club’s manager and give your reasons to support for your choice. 0aa71
Dear Manager, I am writing a response to when I received the announcement that we are going to have a presentation with a famous writer. As we know, we are members of the psychological club, we are researching profound about every thesis in psycho. Nevertheless, having one topic does not receive our attention. That is psychological criminal. This is a tough theme. However, it is not popular, not only our club but also this subject have not received community regard. I believe that it needs to be remarkable. I suppose that understanding psycho of criminal is the crucial key for us holding fundamental conundrum, knowing their behaviors and we could predictable next action of them. I would be grateful if you could invite Anne Shirley Cuthbert. She is a famous writer in this branch, and the thing that makes her special, she is also a psychologist. Ten years of experience, these scientific papers are appreciated and the series book “ the psychological of criminals “ is too insufficient to know that she will be a wonderful host. I would be grateful if you could take my suggestions into account. Sincerely, SOAP
Dear Manager,

I am writing a response to when I received the announcement that we are going to have a presentation with a
famous
writer. As we know, we are members of the psychological club, we are researching profound about every thesis in psycho.
Nevertheless
, having one topic does not receive our attention.
That is
psychological criminal. This is a tough theme.
However
, it is not popular, not
only
our club
but
also
this subject have not received community regard. I believe that it needs to be remarkable. I suppose that understanding psycho of criminal is the crucial key for us holding fundamental conundrum, knowing their
behaviors and
we
could predictable
next
action of them.
I
would be grateful if you could invite Anne Shirley Cuthbert. She is a
famous
writer in this branch, and the thing that
makes
her special, she is
also
a psychologist. Ten years of experience, these scientific papers
are appreciated
and the series book
the psychological of
criminals
is too insufficient to know that she will be a wonderful host. I would be grateful if you could take my suggestions into account.

Sincerely
,

SOAP
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IELTS letter In the next talk, we are going to have a presentation with a famous writer. We still wonder the issue. We would like to get suggestions from members in the club. Who would you suggest talking in the show. What topic shoud the writer talk? write an email to the club’s manager and give your reasons to support for your choice.

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