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Happy birthday my best friend

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Dear, TaylorI am writing to you this letter to congratulate you with your birthday. Wishing you all the best wishes in the world. Always be happy, healthy and wealthy. Last year I couldn't come to your birthday. I was very busy with my diploma work. But this year I believed that we celebrate your birthday together. Unfortunately, this year I also couldn't come. But I sent your your present. I hope, you will like it. Last year I sent you a notebook, dou you remember? This year I bought you your favourite thing ear rings which made by gold. I sent your my photos. Well, one more time I congratulate you with your birthday my dear friend. Your, sincerelyGuli

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