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Your city is going to organize a fruit festival to celebrate the New Year 2022. Write a letter to a university friend, Mr Kien, inviting him to the festival

Your city is going to organize a fruit festival to celebrate the New Year 2022. Write a letter to a university friend, Mr Kien, inviting him to the festival Ykkar
Dear Kien, How are you these days? I hope that everything goes well with your study. Have you got any plans for higher education? Guess what? My city is going to organize a fruit festival to celebrate the New Year 2022. And I'll very happy if you come and enjoy this with me. It will be held in the city square next to Nguyen Hue night market on the last week of December 2021. We often used to go to it to drink coffee and eat fast-food when we was a student. This time, I'll invite you and our best friends to come to my city and enjoy the joyful atmosphere at the festival. At the event, there is variety of attractive programs and activities. I'm sure that you will love them. Firstly, there are many art performances of Vietnam and foreign art troupes as well as bustling and colorful fruit festival. Next, we can enjoy more than 200 fruits representing and introducing a wide variety of fresh and special fruits of different locals. We also can buy some with discount price included. And finally, there is a Fruit Contest. I'll tell you about it now. Many special and strange fruits of different regions compete in this contest to choose the winner. Maybe you will be surprised because they are very big, or very small, of course it is ripe and safe. Sound interesting? Would you like to come here and have a wonderful time? I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. I think you will stay more than just one week. Your best friend, Thuan
Dear
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Kien
,

How are you these days? I hope that everything goes well with your study. Have you
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got
any plans for higher education?

Guess what? My city is going to organize a
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fruit
festival to celebrate the New Year 2022. And I'll
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very
happy if you
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come
and enjoy this with me.

It will
be held
in the city square
next
to Nguyen Hue night market on the last week of December 2021. We
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often
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used
to go to it to drink coffee and eat
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fast
-food when we
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was
a student. This time, I'll invite you and our best friends to
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come
to my city and enjoy the joyful atmosphere at the festival.

At the
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event
, there is variety of attractive programs and activities. I'm sure that you will
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love
them.
Firstly
, there are
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many
art performances of Vietnam and foreign art troupes
as well
as bustling and colorful
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fruit
festival.
Next
, we can enjoy more than 200
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fruits
representing and introducing a wide variety of fresh and special
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fruits
of
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different
locals. We
also
can
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buy
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some
with discount price included. And
finally
, there is a
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Fruit
Contest. I'll
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tell
you about it
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now
.
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Many
special and strange
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fruits
of
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different
regions compete in this contest to choose the winner. Maybe you will
be surprised
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because
they are
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very
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big
, or
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small
,
of course
it is ripe and safe.

Sound interesting? Would you like to
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come
here and have a wonderful time? I am looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
. I
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think
you will stay more than
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just
one week.

Your best friend,

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Thuan
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IELTS letter Your city is going to organize a fruit festival to celebrate the New Year 2022. Write a letter to a university friend, Mr Kien, inviting him to the festival

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8 paragraphs
267 words
6.0
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