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You recently saw a program on television You would like to comment on the same Write a letter to the satellite channel In your letter Introduce yourself and write the name of the program you are writing about Give your comments on the content and quality

You recently saw a program on television You would like to comment on the same Write a letter to the satellite channel In your letter Introduce yourself and write the name of the program you are writing about Give your comments on the content and quality aw80G

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Ruchi, and I have started watching the show ‘Mystery Island’ which is aired by your satellite channel. I am writing this letter to provide my feedback on it. I am an avid fan of this show because every character plays his role brilliantly which makes it even more interesting. However, I am unhappy with a few features of the show. Although the story of the program is very exciting, the language used is abusive and the content is obscene. Therefore, it cannot be seen along with other family members. I would suggest you to ask the writer of the show to modify its content to make it suitable for being watched by families. I am fully aware that it is easier said than done but it would also raise the TRP of the show. I am looking forward to your cooperation in this matter. Yours faithfully, Ruchi Verma

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Possible spelling mistake found.Ru chi
Ruchi
, and I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 watching the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpageantparadefairappearanceprogramspectacle
show
 ‘Mystery Island’ which is aired
 by your satellite channel. I am writing this letter to provide my feedback on it.

I am an avid fan of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpageantparadefairappearanceprogramspectacle
show
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 every character plays his role brilliantly
 which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 it even more interesting. However
, I am unhappy with a few features of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpageantparadefairappearanceprogramspectacle
show
. Although the story of the program is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 exciting, the language This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 is abusive and the content is obscene. Therefore
, it cannot be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 along with other family members.

I would suggest you to ask the writer of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpageantparadefairappearanceprogramspectacle
show
 to modify its content to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it suitable for being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
watched
 by families. I am fully
 aware that it is easier said than done This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it would also
 raise the TRP of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am looking forward to your cooperation in this matter.

Yours faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.Ru chi
Ruchi
Possible spelling mistake found.VersaVelmaVernaErmaVera
Verma