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You recently saw a program on television You would like to comment on the same Write a letter to the satellite channel In your letter Introduce yourself and write the name of the program you are writing about Give your comments on the content and quality

You recently saw a program on television You would like to comment on the same Write a letter to the satellite channel In your letter Introduce yourself and write the name of the program you are writing about Give your comments on the content and quality aw80G
Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Ruchi, and I have started watching the show ‘Mystery Island’ which is aired by your satellite channel. I am writing this letter to provide my feedback on it. I am an avid fan of this show because every character plays his role brilliantly which makes it even more interesting. However, I am unhappy with a few features of the show. Although the story of the program is very exciting, the language used is abusive and the content is obscene. Therefore, it cannot be seen along with other family members. I would suggest you to ask the writer of the show to modify its content to make it suitable for being watched by families. I am fully aware that it is easier said than done but it would also raise the TRP of the show. I am looking forward to your cooperation in this matter. Yours faithfully, Ruchi Verma
Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is
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Ruchi
, and I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
watching the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
show
‘Mystery Island’ which
is aired
by your satellite channel. I am writing this letter to provide my feedback on it.

I am an avid fan of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
show
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
every character plays his role
brilliantly
which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
it even more interesting.
However
, I am unhappy with a few features of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
show
. Although the story of the program is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
exciting, the language
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
is abusive and the content is obscene.
Therefore
, it cannot be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
along with other family members.

I would suggest you to ask the writer of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
show
to modify its content to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it suitable for being
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watched
by families. I am
fully
aware that it is easier said than done
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it would
also
raise the TRP of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am looking forward to your cooperation in this matter.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Ruchi
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Verma

IELTS letter You recently saw a program on television You would like to comment on the same Write a letter to the satellite channel In your letter Introduce yourself and write the name of the program you are writing about Give your comments on the content and quality

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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