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Write a letter complaining about the dirty roads and garbage in your street Why it is effect and problem What is the main causes Your suggestions

Write a letter complaining about the dirty roads and garbage in your street Why it is effect and problem What is the main causes Your suggestions KwYP0
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to bring to your attention a filthy area closest to my house on the North Road. I have been a resident on North Road over 10 years, and I have never had a reason to complain to the council before. Recently, I noticed that massive amount of litters exits at the corner of the road, and it results a sore image to all people who live in the vicinity. Furthermore, keeping litters for long will cause a hazard area with possibility for different diseases. it is also effecting on the business market who located at the nearby places. The council had earlier a contract with a waste management company, and it was responsible for the collection of waste and garbage which were created from all residents and tenants. When the contract has expired with the company, we noticed that no alternative action was taken by the council department to secure garbage collection. The waste`s skips were filled and garbage became over the road. Council has previously his own team who were maintaining the area clean. Rather than wait till signing a new contract with other company, I would ask that you deploy your staff to clean the area from all created wastes and that you ensure they eliminate the pollution by regular inspection. I look forward to the problem being resolved. Yours faithfully, Ayoub
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to bring to your attention a filthy
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area
closest to my
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house
on the North Road.

I have been a resident on North Road over 10 years, and I have never had a reason to complain to the council
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before
. Recently, I noticed that massive amount of litters exits at the corner of the road, and it results a sore image to all
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people
who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in the vicinity.
Furthermore
, keeping litters for long will cause a hazard
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
area
with possibility for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
diseases.
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it
is
also
effecting on the business market who located at the nearby places.

The council had earlier a contract with a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
management
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
, and it was responsible for the collection of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
and garbage which
were created
from all residents and tenants. When the contract has expired with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
, we noticed that no alternative action
was taken
by the council department to secure garbage collection. The
The character between 'waste' and 's' is an accent character, not a standard apostrophe character. Use "waste’s" (curly apostrophe) or "waste's" (straight apostrophe).
waste`s
skips
were filled
and garbage became over the road.

Council has previously his
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
team who were maintaining the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
area
clean.
Rather
than wait till signing a new contract with other
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
, I would ask that you deploy your staff to clean the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
area
from all created
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wastes
and that you ensure they eliminate the pollution by regular inspection.

I look forward to the problem
being resolved
.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Ayoub
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IELTS letter Write a letter complaining about the dirty roads and garbage in your street Why it is effect and problem What is the main causes Your suggestions

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  American English
8 paragraphs
230 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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