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You are planning to return to your hometown after a long absence Write a letter to one of your old friends In your letter Explain that you are coming and that you d like to meet again Describe what you re planning to do Say where you re staying and when y

You are planning to return to your hometown after a long absence Write a letter to one of your old friends In your letter Explain that you are coming and that you d like to meet again Describe what you re planning to do Say where you re staying and when y DlaBW

Dear Emily, How’re you? It’s been a long time since we saw each other and hope you’re doing fine in this period. First of all, heartiest congratulations on your achievement of clearing the IAS exam! You deserve it because you’ve been doing very hard work to crack the exam. I’m sure you will be glad to hear that after so long, finally, I got some time to visit India. My arrival will be on 23 April, and my trip will be a week-long. Since I’ve got a keen interest in Indian history and art, I’m planning to visit various museums and art galleries in Rajasthan. Also, there are some beautiful gardens in the city which I always wanted to see since my childhood days and now is the time to make my dream come true. After spending 3 days in Rajasthan, my plan is to come to your native place Delhi. You don’t need to worry about my stay arrangements as I’ve already booked a guest house near Nehru Stadium. By the way, will you be free to meet me on 26 April? We’d roam around the city like we used to do in our college days, and then we can spend the rest of the day at your home with family members. I’m super excited to meet you soon. Best Wishes, Ruchi

Dear Emily,

How’re you?

It’s been a long time since we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 each other and hope you’re doing fine in this period. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, A determiner is probably missing here: "the heartiest".the heartiest
heartiest
 congratulations on your achievement of clearing the IAS exam! You deserve it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 you’ve been doing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 work to crack the exam. I’m sure you will be glad to hear that after This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 long, finally
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time to visit India. My arrival will be on 23 April, and my trip will be Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
a week-long
.

Since I’ve This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a keen interest in Indian history and art, I’m planning to visit various museums and art galleries in Rajasthan. Also
, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 gardens in the city which I always wanted to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 since my childhood days and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 is the time to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 my dream This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 true. After spending 3 days in Rajasthan, my plan is to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to your native place Delhi.

You don’t need to worry about my stay arrangements as I’ve already booked a guest This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 near Nehru Stadium. By the way, will you be free to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 me on 26 April? We’d roam around the city like we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to do in our college days, and then we can spend the rest of the day at your home with family members.

I’m super excited to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Best Wishes,

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Ruchi