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You recently returned by plane from an overseas trip. When you reached home, you realised you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline.

Dear Sir/Madam, I writing this letter regarding the handbag I left into the airplane when I was on my way back country from Australia. I travelled in the flight number AT4224 from Sydney to Toronto landed around 15: 45 Eastern Standard time. I was so tired after having such a long trip without any stay. when I came out of the airport Premises and I realized that I forgot my Hand luggage into the plane in a hurry. I went back to the airport and I ran directly to the lost section and registered myself. It is a grey in color and there is a Tag on it "MK". There is my driving license in it, my credit card, a family photo and around $300 Canadian Dollar Cash. the only thing which i had in my mind is there is a my grandmother's photo she passed away 5 years ago that one is the only photo i have had with her. I would like to to suggest if you could check with the crew members who were working that day same flight and check lost and found section of your airline. I am looking forward to hear from you back as soon as possible. kindly send me an email yours faithfully, Dakota Johnson

Dear Sir/Madam,

A verb seems to be missing. Did you mean “I’m writing”, “I am writing”, or “I was writing”?I'm writingI am writingI was writing
I writing
 this letter regarding the ‘handbag’ is a common British expression. Consider using expressions more common to American English.purse
handbag
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 into the airplane when I was on my way back country from Australia.

I travelled in the flight number AT4224 from Sydney to Toronto landed around 15: 45 If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Eastern Standard Time
Eastern Standard time
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 tired after having such a long trip without any stay. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.When
when
 I came out of the airport Premises and I realized that I forgot my Hand luggage into the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:aircraft
plane
 in a hurry. I went back to the airport and I ran directly
 to the lost section and registered myself. It is a Possible spelling mistake. ‘grey’ is British English.gray
grey
 in color and there is a Tag on it Use a smart opening quote here.“
"
MKUse a smart closing quote here.”
"
. There is my driving license in it, my credit card, a family photo and around $300 Canadian Dollar Cash. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.The
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 thing which Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 had in my mind is there is A determiner cannot be combined with a possessive pronoun. Did you mean simply “a” or “my”?amy
a my
 grandmother's photo she passed away 5 years ago that one is the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 photo Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have had with her.

I would like Possible typo: you repeated a wordto
to to
 suggest if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 with the crew members who were working that day same flight and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 lost and found section of your airline.

I am looking forward In the grammatical structure ‘look + forward + to + verb’, the verb ‘to’ is used with the gerund: “to hearing”.to hearing
to hear
 from you back as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Kindly
kindly
In some texts, you can shorten this phrase. Consider using “email me”.email me
send me an email


yours faithfully
,

Dakota Johnson