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You have decided to apply for a job as spanish instructor that was advertised in April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional. This ad was posted by Mr. John sullivan, director of the spanish department at The Language institute of Great Britain in London, England. In your letter to Mr. Sullivan : • explain why you are writing • describe your qualifications and experience • explain how they can contact you

Dear Mr. Sullivan, I’m writing this letter in response to the vacancy to apply for the post of ‘Spanish Language Instructor’ as advertised in the Teaching Professional magazine April edition by your concerned department at the Language Institute of Great Britain in London. I would like to share my details of qualification and experience suitable for this job. My CV is attached hereby. I am a qualified trainer of Spanish Language and has attained my Bachelor’s Degree in Spanish language and liguistics from the renowned Coventry University, England. I have an experience of 5 Years of teaching young adults in the University of Birmingham. Thereafter, i went to Mexico and lived there for 3 years and enhanced my spanish language by communicating with the local people of mexico as spanish is the native language of the Mexicans. Thus, apart from my studies i have learnt and spoked spanish by interacting with the Mexican people in day to day life. Overall, It has helped me to learn the spanish language practically. Therefore, i have both the theoratical as well as practical knowledge of this language which i think will prove beneficial for this job. I hope you will find my application suitable and would consider my name for this job. You may contact me either through my email address mentioned in the CV or you may contact me on 07708893246. I look forward to meeting you in a formal interview to further discuss my candidacy for the post. Yours faithfully, Tony Starc
Dear Mr. Sullivan,

I’m writing this letter in response to the vacancy to apply for the post of ‘Spanish
Language
Instructor’ as advertised in the Teaching Professional magazine April edition by your concerned department at the
Language
Institute of Great Britain in London. I would like to share my
details
of qualification and experience suitable for this job. My CV
is attached
hereby.

I am a qualified trainer of Spanish
Language
and has attained my Bachelor’s Degree in Spanish
language
and
liguistics
from the renowned Coventry University, England. I have an experience of 5 Years of teaching young adults in the University of Birmingham. Thereafter,
i
went to Mexico and
lived
there for 3 years and enhanced my
spanish
language
by communicating with the local
people
of
mexico
as
spanish
is the native
language
of the Mexicans.
Thus
, apart from my studies
i
have
learnt
and spoked
spanish
by interacting with the Mexican
people
in day to day life.
Overall
, It has
helped
me to learn the
spanish
language
practically
.
Therefore
,
i
have both the
theoratical
as well as
practical knowledge of this
language
which
i
think
will prove beneficial for this job.

I hope you will find my application suitable and would consider my name for this job. You may contact me either through my email address mentioned in the CV or you may contact me on 07708893246.

I look forward to meeting you in a formal interview to
further
discuss my candidacy for the post.

Yours
faithfully
,

Tony
Starc
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IELTS letter You have decided to apply for a job as spanish instructor that was advertised in April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional. This ad was posted by Mr. John sullivan, director of the spanish department at The Language institute of Great Britain in London, England. In your letter to Mr. Sullivan: • explain why you are writing • describe your qualifications and experience • explain how they can contact you

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
250 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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