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write a letter to a teacher whom you are going to take a language course

Dear Sir, I am writing with regard to apply to language courses which you provide. I am a software developer and I have got a job offer from foreign company. In order to get a visa and work permit, I should pass a language test. I searched educational materials on the Internet and found information about you. Fortunately, I am an active member of our local community’s Facebook group. Yesterday, I saw a post of one of your students, where he gave excellent references for you. Moreover, other people described you as a professional with a rich teaching experience. I asked the address of your office and realised that it is not so far from my home. First of all, I would like you to know that I am an extremely motivated student, because my future carrier depends on the results of the aforementioned test. Also, I want to improve my speaking skills, thus I am going to move to another country. Could you help me with my grammar and speaking skills? What kind of help can you suggest to me? I hope that you would find time and we start our classes as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you. Faithfully yours, Oleg.

Dear Sir,

I am writing with regard to apply to language courses which you provide.

I am a software developer and I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a job offer from foreign This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. In order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a visa and work permit, I should pass a language This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
. I searched educational materials on the Internet and found information about you.

Fortunately
, I am an active member of our local community’s Facebook group. Yesterday, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a post of one of your students, where he gave excellent references for you. Moreover
, other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizedportrayed
described
 you as a professional with a rich teaching experience. I asked the address of your office and Possible spelling mistake. ‘realised’ is British English.realized
realised
 that it is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 far from my home.

Often, this adverbial phrase is redundant. Consider using “first”.First
First of all
, I would like you to know that I am an extremely
 motivated student, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 my future carrier depends on the results of the aforementioned This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
. Also
, I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 my speaking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
, thus
 I am going to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to another country.

Could you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me with my grammar and speaking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
? What kind of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 can you suggest to me? I hope that you would find Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).time, and
time and
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 our classes as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Faithfully
 yours,

Oleg. 