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Your foreign friend is coming for vacation to your country.Write a letter of giving information about your country

Dear John, I am writing to you to give a piece of advice about your upcoming visit to my country. I read your letter and I have some suggestions and warnings. First of all I want to recommend to stay at the hotels in the historical part of our city, because you would have an opportunity to archive all of the ancient monuments by walk. It is extremely convenient and you do not need to spend extra money for transportation. For example I can suggest one beautiful and cozy guest house which situated in colourful place near main historical plase of our city Registan square. One friend of my was pleased by this place, when he stayed there last year. In order to become familiar with history of craft of our area, you could visit famous paper manufacture as well. It could be amazing experience for you as you keen on technologies which used by our ancestors. Lastly, as you are going to come in summer I recommend to wear t-short and trausers in white colour. And of course wear sport shoes, thus we will walk a lot. I hope that I have answered some of your questions. Sencerely yours, Your fried, Oleg.

Dear John,

I am writing to you to give a piece of advice about your upcoming visit to my country. I read your letter and I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 suggestions and warnings.

Often, this adverbial phrase is redundant. Consider using “first”.First
First of all
 I want to The verb ‘recommend’ is used with the gerund form: “recommend staying”.recommend staying
recommend to stay
 at the hotels in the historical part of our city, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 you would have an opportunity to archive Consider using “all the”.all the
all of the
 ancient monuments by walk. It is extremely
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).convenient, and
convenient and
 you do not need to spend extra money for transportation. For The comma is probably missing here: “example, I”.example, I
example I
 can suggest one This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 and cozy guest This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 which situated in Possible spelling mistake. ‘colourful’ is British English.colorful
colourful
 place near main historical Possible spelling mistake found.placepleasephaseplaneplatelase
plase
 of our city Possible spelling mistake found.RegisterResistantRegistryRegistrarRegistrant
Registan
 square. One friend of my was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfied
pleased
 by this place, when he stayed there last year.

In order to become familiar with history of craft of our area, you could visit This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 paper manufacture as well
. It could be amazing experience for you as you keen on technologies which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 by our ancestors.

Lastly
, as you are going to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 in summer I recommend to wear t-short and Possible spelling mistake found.trousers
trausers
 in white Possible spelling mistake. ‘colour’ is British English.color
colour
. And of course
 wear sport shoes, thus
 we will walk a lot.

I hope that I have answered This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of your questions.

Possible spelling mistake found.Sincerely
Sencerely
 yours,

Did you mean “you’re” (short for ‘you are’)?You're
Your
 fried,

Oleg. 