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You are planning a vacation and you need someone to look after your cat while you are away. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter, explain why you are going away for a week describe the cat ask the neighbour if they can perform specific duties to care for the cat

Dear Mary, How are you? I am writing to seek help from you. As you know, I have cat with me. I am going to out of city for a few day, consequently, I would like to ask for your help to take care of my cat. One of my best friend is going to hold a wedding party and invited me to go, which is out of the city. If available, I would like my cat to go with me to share her happiness. Unfortunately, she is not an animal lover. It would not be a good idea bring my sweet heart to join. My cat is not a very active one, but she would like to walk around, especially in a new place. So I think she may walk around when she reach you home. Fortunately, she uses not to touch things that already there. So you may not need to very worry about hiding you glass made products. As you know, cat is so independent that you do not really need much time to take care of it. She is also the same. As a result, you only need to put water and cat food in the morning and evening somewhere in the kitchen and she will take care herself. For sure, I will prepare the bowl and cat food for you because she always care whether that bowl is her own one or not. Long in short, I hope you can help to look after my cat in the coming week. I am leaving on Monday and back not later than Friday. I would be appreciate if you would you like to do this favor to me. Willing to hear from you soon and have a nice day. Best regards Sam

Dear Mary,

How are you? I am writing to seek This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 from you. As you know, I have cat with me. I am going to out of city for a Possible agreement error. The noun day seems to be countable; consider using: “few days”.few days
few day
, consequently
, I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :solicitrequest
ask for
 your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to take You use this word too often, consider replacing it withresponsibility
care
 of my cat.

One of my best friend is going to hold a wedding party and invited me to go, which is out of the city. If available, I would like my cat to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accompany
go with
 me to share her happiness. Unfortunately, she is not an animal lover. It would not be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 bring my This word is normally spelled as one.sweetheart
sweet heart
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
.

My cat is not a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 active one, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 she would like to walk around, especially
 in a new place. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 she may walk around when she The pronoun ‘she’ is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: “reaches”, “reached”.reachesreached
reach
 you home. Fortunately
, she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploits
uses
 not to touch things that already there. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 you may not need to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 worry about hiding you glass made products.

As you know, cat is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 independent that you do not really
 need much time to take You use this word too often, consider replacing it withresponsibility
care
 of it. She is also
 the same. As a result
, you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 need to put water and cat food in the morning and evening somewhere in the Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).kitchen, and
kitchen and
 she will take You use this word too often, consider replacing it withresponsibility
care
 herself. For sure, I will prepare the bowl and cat food for you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 she always The pronoun ‘she’ is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: “cares”, “cared”.carescared
care
 whether that bowl is her This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 one or not.

Long in short, I hope you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to look after my cat in the coming week. I am leaving on Monday and back not later than Friday. I would be Consider using the past participle “appreciated”.appreciated
appreciate
 if you It appears that a comma is missing.would,
would
 you like to do this favor to me. Willing to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 and have a nice day.

Best regards

Sam