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You recently returned by plane from an overseas trip. When you reached home, you realised you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline.

Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing to request your help in recovering a missing bag. I returned yesterday from London to Sydney on Qantas flight QF 123. On landing there was some delay in leaving the aircraft and an elderly passenger needed some help. I was carrying my cabin bag at the time but put it down on the seat (A 23) while I helped this person. I believe I then left the bag on the seat when we left the airplane. The bag is black in colour with a red and gold ‘Giovanni’ brand name on the side. It contains a novel I was reading on the plane as well as some important documents related to my marketing work for the Australian Tourism Agency. I would be very grateful if you would make a search for this bag and let me know the result. If you find the bag, I would like to arrange for its collection. Please phone me on 0488888888. Thank you for your help in this matter. Yours faithfully, Brian Brown
Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing to request your
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help
in recovering a missing bag.

I returned yesterday from London to Sydney on Qantas flight QF 123. On landing there was
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some
delay in leaving the aircraft and an elderly passenger needed
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some
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help
. I was carrying my cabin
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bag
at the time
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but
put it down on the seat (A 23) while I
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helped
this person. I believe I then
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left
the
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bag
on the seat when we
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left
the airplane.

The
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bag
is
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black in colour
with a red and gold ‘Giovanni’ brand name on the side. It contains a novel I was reading on the
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plane
as well
as
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some
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important
documents related to my marketing work for the Australian Tourism Agency.

I would be
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very
grateful if you would
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make
a search for this
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bag
and
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let
me know the result. If you find the
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bag
, I would like to arrange for its collection.
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Please
phone me on 0488888888.

Thank you for your
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help
in this matter.

Yours
faithfully
,

Brian Brown
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IELTS letter You recently returned by plane from an overseas trip. When you reached home, you realised you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline.

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174 words
6.5
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