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letter to your friend, give details of the course you took in university, explain why you recommend the university, give some advice aboout how to apply

Dear Doppuku, Hope you are doing well. I understand that you want some feedback related to the course that I chose to study in Singapore Maritime Academy (SMA). The name of the course is Graduate Marine Engineering (GME). Duration is one year and the fees will be around 15000 Singapore dollars. It’s a full-time course. Timing of the classes during weekdays is from 9: 00 am to 3: 00 pm, no classes on weekends. SMA is one of the maritime universities with modern infrastructures, state-of-art laboratories, workshop with practical coaching facilities. Highlighting feature is they provide real time on-the-job training. Last year, survey of college ranking associations awarded Asia’s top ranking for this institute. Intake starts form April, however application process starts from February itself. To avoid any unforeseen circumstances or delay, my suggestion to you is to initiate preparation as early as possible. Following are the things you require to prepare in advance: a) Application form which you can find on Academy’s website. b) You will be required to submit a reference letter from previous college. c) A letter of intention which details your suitability for this course. d) Last but not least, application fees of S$ 187. I am confident enough that for your profile you will be able to get admission in to this maritime course. Yours lovingly, Elango
Dear
Doppuku
,

Hope you are doing well.

I understand that you want
some
feedback related to the course that I chose to study in Singapore Maritime Academy (SMA).

The name of the course is
Graduate
Marine Engineering (
GME
). Duration is one year and the fees will be around 15000 Singapore dollars. It’s a full-time course. Timing of the classes during weekdays is from 9: 00 am to 3: 00 pm, no classes on weekends.

SMA is one of the maritime universities with modern infrastructures, state-of-art laboratories, workshop with practical coaching facilities. Highlighting feature is they provide real time on-the-job training. Last year, survey of college ranking associations awarded Asia’s top ranking for this institute.

Intake
starts
form April,
however
application process
starts
from February itself. To avoid any unforeseen circumstances or delay, my suggestion to you is to initiate preparation as early as possible.

Following are the things you require
to prepare
in advance:

a) Application form which you can find on Academy’s website.

b) You will
be required
to submit a reference letter from previous college.

c) A letter of intention which
details
your suitability for this course.

d) Last
but
not least, application fees of
S$
187.

I am confident
enough
that for your profile you will be able to
get
admission in to this maritime course.

Yours
lovingly
,

Elango
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IELTS letter letter to your friend, give details of the course you took in university, explain why you recommend the university, give some advice aboout how to apply

Letter
  American English
14 paragraphs
217 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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