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You recently repaired and now it is not working properly

You recently repaired and now it is not working properly 2bQPo

Dear SirI am a teacher of school. Every day I go to school by car. The school is far from my house. I am writing in the hope of that you can help me with a problem regarding my car that I recently had my car repaired and now it is not working properly. On the first of April I visited your autosevise in order to repair my car. At there your servant controled my car and after 20 minutes he said my car corrected. While I came home my car's condition was well. However when I utilized it second time it did not work. In addition to this my car did not work. I would like you repaired my car and the resolution of this matter. I will wait two days before turning to customer service Association responsible for this problem. Please contact me on my mobile number at 98896387. Your faithfully, Yasminam.

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SirI
 am a teacher of school. Every day I go to school by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
. The school is far from my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. I am writing in the hope of that you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me with a problem regarding my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 that I recently had my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 repaired and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 it is not working properly
. On the first
 of April I visited your Possible spelling mistake found.autosave
autosevise
 in order to repair my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
. At there your servant Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "controlled", the past tense form of the verb 'control'?controlled
controled
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 and after 20 minutes he said my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 corrected. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
 I came home my car's condition was well. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 when I utilized it second time it did not work. In addition
 to this my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 did not work. I would like you repaired my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 and the resolution of this matter. I will wait two days This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 turning to customer service Association responsible for this problem. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 contact me on my mobile number at 98896387. Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
faithfully
, Possible spelling mistake found.YasminYasmine
Yasminam
. 