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You recently repaired and now it is not working properly

You recently repaired and now it is not working properly 2bQPo
Dear SirI am a teacher of school. Every day I go to school by car. The school is far from my house. I am writing in the hope of that you can help me with a problem regarding my car that I recently had my car repaired and now it is not working properly. On the first of April I visited your autosevise in order to repair my car. At there your servant controled my car and after 20 minutes he said my car corrected. While I came home my car's condition was well. However when I utilized it second time it did not work. In addition to this my car did not work. I would like you repaired my car and the resolution of this matter. I will wait two days before turning to customer service Association responsible for this problem. Please contact me on my mobile number at 98896387. Your faithfully, Yasminam.
Dear
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SirI
am a teacher of school. Every day I go to school by
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car
. The school is far from my
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house
. I am writing in the hope of that you can
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help
me with a problem regarding my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
that I recently had my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
repaired and
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now
it is not working
properly
. On the
first
of April I visited your
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autosevise
in order to repair my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
. At there your servant
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controled
my
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car
and after 20 minutes he said my
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car
corrected.
“While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
I came home my car's condition was well.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
However
when I utilized it second time it did not work.
In addition
to this my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
did not work. I would like you repaired my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
and the resolution of this matter. I will wait two days
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before
turning to customer service Association responsible for this problem.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
contact me on my mobile number at 98896387.
Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
faithfully
,
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Yasminam
.

IELTS letter You recently repaired and now it is not working properly

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154 words
5.0
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