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Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you left the plane, you left a bag. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, explain what has happened describe the bag and its content and say what you would like them to do about it. Write at least 150 words.

Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you left the plane, you left a bag. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, explain what has happened describe the bag and its content and say what you would like them to do about it. wBPXq
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to report about the bag that I left in the plane bound to London last week. I must have lost the bag during off-boarding. If I remember correctly, I failed to check the seats and I must have left it under it. Unfortunately, I did not notice that it was missing until I got in the hotel. The bag is a small black leather handbag with a white strap. Inside of it is a blue wallet which contains my driver's license, student identification card, transporation card, credit cards, and some cash: about $ 20. 00 in total. I would appreciate it if you could let me know if you found a bag of this description. If you have it, you may contact me at my mobile number - 091700000 and I will make arrangements to collect it at your earliest convenience. Thank you, Jas
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to report about the
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bag
that I
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left
in the
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plane
bound to London last week.

I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
have lost the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
during off-boarding. If I remember
correctly
, I failed to
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check
the seats and I
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must
have
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left
it under it. Unfortunately, I did not notice that it was missing until I
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got
in the hotel.

The
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bag
is a
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small
black leather handbag with a white strap.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "Inside".
Inside of
it is a blue wallet which contains my driver's license, student identification card,
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transporation
card, credit cards, and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
cash: about
The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: "$20".
$ 20
. 00 in total.

I would appreciate it if you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know if you found a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
of this description. If you have it, you may contact me at my mobile number
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
091700000 and I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
arrangements to collect it at your earliest convenience.

Thank you,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Jas

IELTS letter Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you left the plane, you left a bag. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, explain what has happened describe the bag and its content and say what you would like them to do about it.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
150 words
5.0
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