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You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you. 98eX

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to enquire about the electrical goods at your store. As my sister's wedding ceremony is fast approching, I have been searching everywhere to purchase a big electronic barbecue and a gigantic lamps. In case, you have those things would you mind to contact with me throughout my email and if you do not have them please let me know if you are able to order them from other places. One more thing I would really want to know whether you guys are able to send me the prices of an enormous lamp and electronic barbecue. I know those are a little bit costly, however, for such an event I think it is worth to buy them. Besides it, if everything went as planned and I was able to purchase those items, I just wander how long you could hold my electronic goods for me. I would really appreciate it if you could keep those for me until the next week. Thanks in advance. Yours faithfully, Ughur Gasimov

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.inquire
enquire
 about the electrical This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 at your store. As my sister's wedding ceremony is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
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approching
, I have been searching everywhere to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 electronic barbecue and a gigantic Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "lamp"?lamp
lamps
. In case, you have those things would you mind to contact with me throughout my email and if you do not have them This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know if you are able to order them from other places.

One more thing I would really
 want to know whether you guys are able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me the prices of an enormous lamp and electronic barbecue. I know those are a Reduce redundancy by using "little" or "bit".littlebit
little bit
 costly, however
, for such an This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it is worth to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 them.

Besides
 it, if everything went as Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).planned, and
planned and
 I was able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 those items, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 wander how long you could hold my electronic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 for me. I would really
 appreciate it if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 those for me until the next
 week. Thanks in advance.

Yours faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.Uighur
Ughur
Possible spelling mistake found.Asimov
Gasimov