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Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In your letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In your letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it JnMw

Dear Sir/MadamI had ordered mobile earphone online from your company about three days ago and my order id is ‘AHMD00PT’. Today I got my order delivery and I was really looking forward to enjoy music using my new earphone. However, after connecting it with my phone I was disappointed as it has many problems. Let me tell you those problems in detail. First of all, one side of earphone is not working. Also, I ordered for black colour handsfree but I got it in red and I dont like red colour at all. There is also problem with bass, it is not as loud as it was mentioned on its packaging. Hence, overall quality of earplugs is not satisfying to me. I had expected it to much better as per you company’s reputation. As your earphone is not upto my expectations and it is full of problems I demand complete refund of my money. I have already placed return order and I would be obliged if you return my money as soon a possible. I also want to suggest you to improve product quality. I will be looking forward for better products from your company in future. Your faithfully, John Snow.

Dear Sir/Possible spelling mistake found.MadamMadameMadamsMadam I
MadamI
 had ordered mobile earphone online from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 about three days ago and my order id is ‘AHMD00PT’. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 my order Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).delivery, and
delivery and
 I was really
 looking forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to enjoying".to enjoying
to enjoy
 music using my new earphone. However
, after connecting it with my phone I was disappointed
 as it has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problems
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problems
 in detail.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, one side of earphone is not working. Also
, I ordered for black Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
Possible spelling mistake found.hands free
handsfree
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 it in red and I Possible spelling mistake founddon't
dont
 like red Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
 at all. There is also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problem
 with bass, it is not as loud as it was mentioned
 on its packaging. Hence
, overall
 quality of earplugs is not satisfying to me. I had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 it Did you mean "too"?too
to
 much better as per you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
’s reputation.

As your earphone is not Possible spelling mistake found.untoUptonPTOup toUSPTO
upto
 my expectations and it is full of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problems
 I demand complete refund of my money. I have already placed return order and I would be obliged
 if you return my money as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 a possible. I also
 want to suggest you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 product quality.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 will be looking forward for better products from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
in future
.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
faithfully
, John Snow. 