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You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract. 6AxB
Dear Sir/ Ma’am, I, the undersigned, would like to request you for an early termination to my contract for Flat No. 221, Sherlock Apartments on Baker Street owing to my transfer to another city for work-related purposes. I had rented the above mentioned flat from your agency in May, 2019 for a period of 12 months. At the time, I had newly started as an apprentice at the Daily Planet and had planned to work at the same location. Although, the apartment is very well suited to my needs, I would like to request you to allow me to leave the flat before the end of the stipulated time period. This is due to the fact that, this month, I have been promoted to a reporter and I am expected to report to the Head Office in Kansas City within 15 Days. Since, this is an extremely attractive opportunity for my career, I will be taking up the position and moving to Kansas City within the next week. Looking forward to a positive response, Yours faithfully, John Watson
Dear Sir/ Ma’am,

I, the undersigned, would like to request you for an early termination to my contract for Flat No. 221, Sherlock Apartments on Baker Street owing to my transfer to another city for work-related purposes.

I had rented the above mentioned flat from your agency in
May, 2019
for a period of 12 months. At the time, I had
newly
started
as an apprentice at the Daily Planet and had planned to work at the same location.

Although, the apartment is
very
well suited to my needs, I would like to request you to
allow
me to
leave
the flat
before
the
end
of the stipulated time period.

This is due to the fact that
, this month, I have
been promoted
to a
reporter and
I am
expected
to report to the Head Office in Kansas City within 15 Days. Since, this is an
extremely
attractive opportunity for my career, I will be taking up the position and moving to Kansas City within the
next
week.

Looking forward to a
positive
response,

Yours
faithfully
,

John Watson
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IELTS letter You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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