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You Recently Received A Letter From A Friend Asking For Advice About Whether To Go To College Or Try To Get A Job

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Dear Sohag, Hope you are doing well. I’ve received your letter two days ago, where you were asking me to give some advice about either to go to college or try to find out a suitable job for you. I think a job is better for you than go to college. I’ve been knowing you since our childhood, as you have more interest to do practical work rather than attending school such as fixing to disable the car. Moreover, you were also less likely to submit the school homework in every class which did not make you a good score on your result sheet. If you want to enrol in college you cannot be continued because education doesn’t make you a sense of satisfaction. On the other hand, finding a job is suitable for you because you always tried to do something like a part-time job besides your education, for example, changing a car’s tyre in a small vehicle servicing workshop near your home. Moreover, I have heard you lost your father one year before, which makes me think again that you need a good salary job for supporting your family. In my view, I would say, automobile service is better for you owing to know your interest. In our country, nowadays, many automobile factories would like to give a short course for the enthusiastic candidates before starting the practical work. All the best, Nayeem

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