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Disagreement with my roommate

Disagreement with my roommate R23oV
Dear Sir I am writing to express disagreement with my roommate. We live together with four girls which in a room provided by the JDPIA institute. One girl, her name is Ann, she is jarring. Therefore I am writing to you on this issue. Ann always breaks my nerves. She regular hard read within reading book. That prevents me from studying. Plus, she constantly touch my all things don't ask from me. As a loyal student. I hope you will interested in my comments. I can't live with Ann other. Hence you move me to another room or abrogate my roommate. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convinience. Your loyal studentsDiana
Dear Sir I am writing to express disagreement with my roommate. We
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live
together with four girls which in a room provided by the
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JDPIA
institute. One girl, her name is Ann, she is jarring.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Therefore
I am writing to you on this issue. Ann always breaks my nerves.
It seems that a verb is missing after "She". Please verify.
She
regular
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hard
read within reading book. That
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prevents
me from studying. Plus, she
constantly
The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "touches", "touched".
touch
my all things don't ask from me. As a loyal student. I hope you will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "interest"
interested
in my comments. I can't
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
with Ann other.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Hence
you
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move
me to another room or abrogate my roommate. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest
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convinience
. Your loyal
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
studentsDiana

IELTS letter Disagreement with my roommate

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
114 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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