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write a letter to a company applying for a job that you saw in a news paper advertisement

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Dear sir, madam I am intsrested in applying in your company, for the position that has been advertise in todays newspaper. I have recently complited my graduation from fleming college under the course of occupational therapist and physiotherapist assisatant. I have complited my co-op and gained my practical knowedgefrom two different settings; the very first if from pediatric center where I complited 340 hours and the next is rehabilitation clinic in greater Toronto where I finished 280 hours. I am an hardworking and dedicated therapist who is intrested in looking forward to improve my knowledge and putting that into better enviroment which will help me to grow in my currior.
Dear sir, madam

I am
intsrested
in applying in
your
company
, for the position that has been

advertise
in
todays
newspaper.

I have recently
complited
my graduation from
fleming
college under the course of

occupational
therapist and physiotherapist
assisatant
. I have
complited
my co-op
and


gained my practical
knowedgefrom
two
different
settings; the
very
first
if from

pediatric center where I
complited
340 hours and the
next
is rehabilitation clinic in greater

Toronto where I finished 280 hours.

I am
an
hardworking and dedicated therapist who is
intrested
in looking forward to
improve


my
knowledge and putting that into better
enviroment
which will
help
me to grow in my
currior
.
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IELTS letter write a letter to a company applying for a job that you saw in a news paper advertisement

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
110 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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