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Dear MRoy, Greetings! Hope you are fine.

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Dear MRoy, Greetings! Hope you are fine. It's a long time, we didn't meet. After overcoming some difficulties, now I am on a stable state to move forward on my career path. Today, I am going to discuss that. You know, I have several plans regarding career paths. At last, I have decided to immigrate to Canada through "Express Entry" program. It's a great scope to move forward Canada. I will get PR card within very sorted time after landing. First of all, I will get admission on M. Sc program. Then, I have a plan to find out job opportunities to top IT company. Within that time, I will apply for the Canadian passport. And that will be really great. After achieving that golden duck, I will be allowed to move USA without any immigration complexity. That would be really a great deal, I think. I will not extend more for today. But, still I miss those days which were passed together with so many memories. And obviously, feel free to ask any further information. Sincerely, Ornab Hasan
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MRoy
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Greetings! Hope you are fine. It's a long time, we didn't
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meet
. After overcoming
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some
difficulties,
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now
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move
forward on my career path.
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Today
, I am going to discuss that.

You know, I have several plans regarding career paths. At last, I have decided to immigrate to Canada through
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Express Entry
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program. It's a great scope to
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move
forward Canada. I will
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get
PR card within
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sorted time after landing.
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First of all
, I will
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get
admission on
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M. Sc
program. Then, I have a plan to find out job opportunities to top IT
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company
. Within that time, I will apply for the Canadian passport. And that will be
really
great. After achieving that golden duck, I will be
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allowed
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
USA without any immigration complexity. That would be
really
a great deal, I
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think
.

I will not extend more for
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today
.
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But
,
still
I miss those days which
were passed
together with
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many
memories. And
obviously
, feel free to ask any
further
information.

Sincerely
,

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IELTS letter Dear MRoy, Greetings! Hope you are fine.

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178 words
6.0
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