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I am writing on behalf of myself and my flatmate about Number 12 Student Avenue as we have been having some problems with central heating. We noticed that if we leave the room more than five hours the room will become colder. It means that we are not able to stay either do our task probably. It may cause also, get a fewer or flu in a such period of time like quarantine In addition, the hot water came in with difficulties early morning after night so that we have to wait some time. Iit means that we might late to to our course. We know there are other accomodation speicially for international students, we would be grateful if you can sovle this problem giving us the room with all conditions for students which is used to live in maditirian climate. I would wait your prompt reply as soon as possible. Your faithfully
I am writing on behalf of myself and my flatmate about Number 12 Student Avenue as we have been having
some
problems with central heating.

We noticed that if we
leave
the room more than five hours the room will become colder. It means that we are not able to stay either do our task
probably
. It may cause
also
,
get
a fewer or flu in a such period of time like quarantine

In addition
, the hot water came in with difficulties early morning after night
so
that we
have to
wait
some
time.
Iit
means that we might late
to to
our course.

We know there are other
accomodation
speicially
for international students, we would be grateful if you can
sovle
this problem giving us the room with all conditions for students which is
used
to
live
in
maditirian
climate.

I would wait your prompt reply as
soon
as possible.

Your
faithfully
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IELTS letter letter requesting letter

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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