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You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college • Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her • Suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him/her

You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college • Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her • Suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him/her 85a0P
Hi, Alex, I was so glad to hear from you. I hope my letter finds you in good health and mood. First of all, let me congratulate your graduation from school. As far as I understood from you letter you are hesitating to take a gap year before entering college or go on with your academic education. On one hand, I am sure you will pass your entering exams with flying colors, as you are so hard-working. Yet, I would advise you not to enter the college this year. I can bring numerous reasons proving a year’s break from study may benefit you greatly, but let me focus on a few of them. Last year at school was a hard one for you emotionally and physically. Frankly speaking, you really need a rest. All the tension of the school-leaving examinations will reflect on your future studies. Take a week’s vocation and travel to some distant country. Let your mind relax. After you return with your mind fresh, try to find a job in the marketing field. If my mind serves me right, you have chosen it for your major studies at the university, haven’t you? You can hardly imagine the advantages of a year’s work experience. I can drop a line to a friend of mine specializing in that area. I am sure a smart boy like you could be of great help at their office. Whatever you decide, I wish you success on your way. Let me know if you need a piece of advice or any other help. My warmest wishes and blessings. Antony
Hi, Alex,

I was
so
glad to hear from you. I hope my letter finds you in
good
health and mood.
First of all
,
let
me congratulate your graduation from school. As far as I understood from you letter you are hesitating to take a gap
year
before
entering college or go on with your academic education.

On one hand, I am sure you will pass your entering exams with flying colors, as you are
so
hard
-working.
Yet
, I would advise you not to enter the college this
year
. I can bring numerous reasons proving a
year’s
break from study may benefit you
greatly
,
but
let
me focus on a few of them.

Last
year
at school was a
hard
one for you
emotionally
and
physically
.
Frankly
speaking, you
really
need a rest. All the tension of the school-leaving examinations will reflect on your future studies. Take a week’s vocation and travel to
some
distant country.
Let
your mind relax.

After you return with your mind fresh, try to find a job in the marketing field. If my mind serves me right, you have chosen it for your major studies at the university, haven’t you? You can hardly imagine the advantages of a
year’s
work experience. I can drop a line to a friend of mine specializing in that area. I am sure a smart boy like you could be of great
help
at their office.

Whatever you decide, I wish you success on your way.
Let
me know if you need a piece of advice or any other
help
.

My warmest wishes and blessings.

Antony
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IELTS letter You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college • Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her • Suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him/her

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8 paragraphs
265 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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