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Write a letter to manager of the hotel. You have seen an advertisement in the newspaper and interested in one of the job. In your letter:- - Which Job you are looking for? - Explain why you are interested in the job? - Explain what prior experience and skills you have in relation to the position?

Write a letter to manager of the hotel. You have seen an advertisement in the newspaper and interested in one of the job. In your letter: - - Which Job you are looking for? - Explain why you are interested in the job? - Explain what prior experience and skills you have in relation to the position? 3aAwm
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to apply for the job in your hotel which was advertised in the newspaper last week that is March 21 2021. I completed my graduate in Hotel and Tourism Management so I’m looking forward for the receptionist job in your hotel. I am very interested in this job and I believe that I am suitable for the position. I also enjoy meeting people from all over the world very much and this job will be a good opportunity for me to practice the foreign languages that I can speak. During my graduate training I have worked as a receptionist in a small hotel for six months and this experience helped me to put my knowledge into practice. After my graduation, I attended few seminars held by experts on my field which gave me even more valuable information. I can fluently speak English and French. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully Sesha Anil
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to apply for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
in your hotel which
was advertised
in the newspaper last week
that is
Commas set off the year in a month-day-year date: "March 21,".
March 21
2021.

I completed my graduate in Hotel and Tourism Management
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so
I’m looking forward for the receptionist
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
in your hotel.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am
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very
interested in this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
and I believe that I am suitable for the position.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
also
enjoy meeting
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people
from all over the world
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very
much and this
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job
will be a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
opportunity for me to practice the foreign languages that I can speak.

During my graduate training I have worked as a receptionist in a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
hotel for six months and this experience
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me to put my knowledge into practice. After my graduation, I attended few seminars held by experts on my field which gave me even more valuable information. I can
fluently
speak English and French.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Faithfully


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Sesha
Anil

IELTS letter Write a letter to manager of the hotel. You have seen an advertisement in the newspaper and interested in one of the job. In your letter: - - Which Job you are looking for? - Explain why you are interested in the job? - Explain what prior experience and skills you have in relation to the position?

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162 words
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