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You have recently purchased a gift item for one of your friends. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, • tell him/her about the gift • tell how you want to sent the gift to this friend • explain why you chose this gift for your friend

You have recently purchased a gift item for one of your friends. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, • tell him/her about the gift • tell how you want to sent the gift to this friend • explain why you chose this gift for your friend BJl85
Dear John, How are you? Hope you and your family are pink in health. It’s been so long time we have not met and also, I am on Europe tour from couple of months. I am really existed to inform you that I bought a gift for you, which I believe you will love the most. Actually, It’s the smart watch with numerous function like heart rate, step count and many more. The color of the strip is orange which you ask for and the dial with black color. It is also very light weight and shinny. I know you were desperate to buy this as this covers all your dream tools for smart watch. More over, I have courier the watch on your home address, I have also mentioned your phone number, so you should expect to get the call before courier get’s deliver, please write me about your expression on gift. Will meet you once I am back from Europe tour, take care. Best wishes, Victor
Dear John,

How are you? Hope you and your family are pink in health. It’s been
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so
long time we have not met and
also
, I am on Europe tour from
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couple of
months. I am
really
existed to inform you that I
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bought
a gift for you, which I believe you will
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love
the most.

Actually, It’s the smart
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watch
with numerous function like heart rate, step count and
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many
more. The color of the strip is orange which you
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ask for
and the dial with black color. It is
also
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very
light weight and shinny. I know you were desperate to
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buy
this as this covers all your dream tools for smart
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watch
.

More over, I have courier the
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watch
on your home address, I have
also
mentioned your phone number,
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so
you should
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expect
to
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get
the call
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before
courier
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get’s
deliver,
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please
write me about your expression on gift.

Will
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meet
you once I am back from Europe tour, take care.

Best wishes,

Victor
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IELTS letter You have recently purchased a gift item for one of your friends. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, • tell him/her about the gift • tell how you want to sent the gift to this friend • explain why you chose this gift for your friend

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7 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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