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You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference. Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted

You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference. Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted e5eQJ
Dear Mr. Phillips, I am writing to request for permission to carry out a presentation on "Productivity in the Work Place". This is in reference to the recently completed conference on the above subject by Harvard University. I am quite confident that the organization would benefit from this. What I have in mind is a PowerPoint presentation, highlighting the key areas employees can be productive and give their best towards achieving organizational goals. The presentation will cover the following areas: Timesheet management, performance management and reward system. The estimated time for this, is one hour with an option of a five minute break for snacks. Due to the expansiveness of the topics to be discussed, I would advice that it be made compulsory for all staff. As staff members of a forward thinking organization, there is a need to be constantly productive. A redundant staff affects optimization of company goals. The venue would be the Firm's Conference room. I have confirmed from the Human Resource Department that it will be available on the following dates: 5th -10th March 2021. In summary, effective use of staff leads to optimal productivity and forms to encourage this should be pushed constantly. I would be most grateful if my application is considered. Yours Sincerely, John Doe
Dear Mr. Phillips,

I am writing to request for permission to carry out a presentation on
"
Productivity in the Work Place
"
. This is in reference to the recently completed conference on the above subject by Harvard University. I am quite confident that the organization would benefit from this.

What I have in mind is a PowerPoint presentation, highlighting the key areas employees can be productive and give their best towards achieving organizational goals. The presentation will cover the following areas:
Timesheet
management, performance management and reward system. The estimated time for this, is one hour with an option of a
five minute
break for snacks.

Due to the expansiveness of the topics to
be discussed
, I would
advice
that it
be made
compulsory for all
staff
. As
staff
members of a forward thinking organization, there is a need to be
constantly
productive. A redundant
staff
affects optimization of
company
goals. The venue would be the Firm's Conference room. I have confirmed from the Human Resource Department that it will be available on the following dates: 5th -10th March 2021.

In summary, effective
use
of
staff
leads to optimal productivity and forms to encourage this should
be pushed
constantly
.

I would be
most
grateful if my application
is considered
.

Yours
Sincerely
, John Doe
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IELTS letter You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference. Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted

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