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You recently received a letter from a friend

You recently received a letter from a friend GlX8B
Dear David, I hope you and your family are doing good. I do remember the last vacation we spent together in Goa and that was a couple of years back. I am sorry for replying late to your letter in which you have mentioned that you are unable to make a decesion whether to join a colloge or start seraching for a job. You might me aware that all the people in our group have started working and the PG course are better to do with a few years of work experience. You might not enjoy doing this as we did enjoy in school or while doing degree. I would advice you to start looking for a job and later you can join the post graduate course with hands on experince. As most of friends who have completed PG are finding it hard to get job placements as they do not have any job realted skills. I do suggets you to look out for Jobs in Sales or Markeitng as you are very good in communication. Kindly do send me a letter in case you need much details specific Job. Your lovingly, Prabhu
Dear David,

I hope you and your family are doing
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good
. I do remember the last vacation we spent together in Goa and that was a couple of years
Possible agreement error. Did you mean "backs"? (Some collective nouns can be treated as both singular and plural, so 'back' is not always incorrect.)
back
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am sorry for replying late to your letter in which you have mentioned that you are unable to
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make
a
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decesion
whether to
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join
a
Possible spelling mistake found.
colloge
or
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start
Possible spelling mistake found.
seraching
for a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
. You might me aware that all the
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people
in our group have
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started
working and the PG course are better to do with a few years of work experience. You might not enjoy doing this as we did enjoy in school or while doing degree.

I would
The word 'advise' is a noun. Did you mean "advise" (verb)?
advice
you to
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start
looking for a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
and later you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
the post graduate course with hands on
Possible spelling mistake found.
experince
. As
After 'most of', you should use 'the' ("most of the friends") or simply say "most friends".
most of friends
who have completed PG are finding it
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hard
to
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get
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
placements as they do not have any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
Possible spelling mistake found.
realted
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skills
. I do
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suggets
you to look out for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Jobs
in Sales or
Possible spelling mistake found.
Markeitng
as you are
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very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
in communication.

Kindly do
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me a letter in case you need
Use "many" with countable nouns.
much
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
specific Job.

Your
lovingly
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Prabhu

IELTS letter You recently received a letter from a friend

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
192 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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