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You are going to leave your apartment in an English speaking country and your landlord is a very good person, who has assisted you a lot during your stay. Meanwhile, your friend wants to rent the flat after you.

You are going to leave your apartment in an English speaking country and your landlord is a very good person, who has assisted you a lot during your stay. Meanwhile, your friend wants to rent the flat after you. eKGWp
Hello Mr. Smith, My name is Sagar Jaiswal and I have completed my Master's degree in AI from your college last month. I am writing to request you to reissue my certificate because I have lost the original one while traveling. Firstly, I am thankful to you and your staff who have organized the course in a hassle-free manner. The sessions were really interactive and helpful. Further, I would like to let you know that I have completed the program successfully and I have been awarded my certificate as well but while moving from Germany to India, I have lost my bag and the certificate was also in that bag. Since my company has sent me there to complete the course, they are asking me to submit the certificate. The certificate is necessary because they have to share the same with our stakeholders. Now it's absolutely important for me to arrange the certificate by next week. I know it's a last-minute request but I would really appreciate if you could send me a copy of my result along with the completion certificate. My address and other mailing details have available in my enrollment form. Thanks in advance for your help and support. I will look forward to hearing back from you. Thanks Sagar
Hello Mr. Smith,

My name is
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Sagar
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Jaiswal
and I have completed my Master's degree in AI from your college last month. I am writing to request you to reissue my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
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because
I have lost the original one while traveling.

Firstly
, I am thankful to you and your staff who have organized the course in a hassle-free manner. The sessions were
really
interactive

and helpful.
Further
, I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
you know that I have completed the program
successfully
and I have
been awarded
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
as well
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
while moving from Germany to India, I have lost my bag and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
was
also
in that bag.

Since my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
me there to complete the course, they are asking me to submit the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
is necessary
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
share the same with our stakeholders.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
it's
absolutely
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
for me to arrange the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
by
next
week.

I know it's a last-minute request
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I would
really
appreciate if you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me a copy of my result along with the completion
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
. My address and other mailing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
have available in my enrollment form.

Thanks in advance for your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
and support. I will look forward to hearing back from you.

Thanks

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Sagar

IELTS letter You are going to leave your apartment in an English speaking country and your landlord is a very good person, who has assisted you a lot during your stay. Meanwhile, your friend wants to rent the flat after you.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
212 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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