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you are recently moving to a new house as you were facing some serious problem there. Write a latter to your cousin and explain:- why you move there, describe your your place, invite him to visit.

you are recently moving to a new house as you were facing some serious problem there. Write a latter to your cousin and explain: - why you move there, describe your your place, invite him to visit. 2lMRx
Dear Sarah, I hope my letter finds you in good health and high spirits. You'll be glad to know that I have shifted to a new house yesterday. As you know, the house where I was living with my family was too congested for a joint family like ours. The situation had aggravated since my brother-in-law got married and started his own family. Fortunately, I came across a property on the outskirts of the city. Although the house is far from the city yet it proves to be a boon for my family as we no longer have to face a space crunch. It is a fully furnished double-storey house having ample space for parking. What about lunch at my place because it will give us an opportunity to relive our nostalgic memories. The request for your reply is in favor so that I can make arrangements accordingly. Looking forward to seeing you soon here. Yours truly, jass,
Dear Sarah, I hope my letter finds you in
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yesterday. As you know, the
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house
where I was living with my
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family
was too congested for a joint
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family
like ours. The situation had aggravated since my brother-in-law
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got
married and
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his
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family
.
Fortunately
, I came across a property on the outskirts of the city. Although the
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house
is far from the city
yet
it proves to be a boon for my
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family
as we no longer
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have to
face a space crunch.

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fully
furnished
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double-storey
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having ample space for parking. What about lunch at my place
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because
it will give us an opportunity to relive our nostalgic memories. The request for your reply is in favor
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that I can
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arrangements
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here. Yours
truly
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IELTS letter you are recently moving to a new house as you were facing some serious problem there. Write a latter to your cousin and explain: - why you move there, describe your your place, invite him to visit.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
158 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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